1. 6 2. 7 3. 9 4. 5 5. I understood it's a game, they're drawn well! for few details I wanna say: change Robin's hair, light brownish would be nice. On Marian I first looked at 2 different sized feet. Hey change that!! Everything else looks fine on her.
6. I like the sky, road, Marian, don't like the arrow down left.
7. maybe try put the arrow on tree. the castle, I'd add few windows. Behind Robin it's kind of too plain.
Colors are very simple looking good ! Characters are also good matching with background ! Actually characters are nice but I am confusing about road ! You should think about road one more time may be ....
1. 10/10 2. 10/10 3. 10/10 4. 10/10 5. 10/10 (i see improved version, cool! much better than before ^^) 6. i like its simplicity, soft colors, actually everything 7. i think u should work more on castle, it's way tooo simple kkk
2. 8 (use different tones to see the dept for the background like the mountain that have catsle should be more lighter than the mountain for the village cause of the distant)
3.10
4. Characters? 9
5. 9
6. i like the flipping button XDD and the composition for the characters..i feel weird looking at the road..
7. put paper texture around the paper's edges for the character page
1. 9 2. 8 3. 8 4. 9 5. 10 6. The color scheme is not so sharp and differentiated. It is more easy to play the game. 7. The connection between pages are considerable. Probably, better to use different style of Robin Hood's pictures (not only standing).
oh btw, u should have added in loading part some score table/sheet (sth that shows how much coins u caught) so that u can use these earned scores in a real game part
12 comments:
1. 6
2. 7
3. 9
4. 5
5. I understood it's a game, they're drawn well! for few details I wanna say: change Robin's hair, light brownish would be nice.
On Marian I first looked at 2 different sized feet. Hey change that!! Everything else looks fine on her.
6. I like the sky, road, Marian,
don't like the arrow down left.
7. maybe try put the arrow on tree. the castle, I'd add few windows. Behind Robin it's kind of too plain.
Good Luck!
thanks..
Colors are very simple looking good ! Characters are also good matching with background ! Actually characters are nice but I am confusing about road ! You should think about road one more time may be ....
1. 10/10
2. 10/10
3. 10/10
4. 10/10
5. 10/10 (i see improved version, cool! much better than before ^^)
6. i like its simplicity, soft colors, actually everything
7. i think u should work more on castle, it's way tooo simple kkk
good job! d(^-^)b
1. 9
2. 8 (use different tones to see the dept for the background like the mountain that have catsle should be more lighter than the mountain for the village cause of the distant)
3.10
4. Characters? 9
5. 9
6. i like the flipping button XDD
and the composition for the characters..i feel weird looking at the road..
7. put paper texture around the paper's edges for the character page
comment mine too
everything is very good
but i dun really like robin's texture on the shirt..it makes him look.. not brave..maybe lower opacity of texture :)
sorry didnt notice in previous post .. hee :)
yeah i also dun like, still changing and experimenting,,,
i even forgot to show layer of the logo in this post.. :(
Updated!
1. 9
2. 8
3. 8
4. 9
5. 10
6. The color scheme is not so sharp and differentiated. It is more easy to play the game.
7. The connection between pages are considerable. Probably, better to use different style of Robin Hood's pictures (not only standing).
1.10
2.10
3.10
4.10
5.10
6. I like Marian,nd her dress.
7. Good Job!
i like the new version of loading part, now it looks more robin like and coins have a better shape. ^^
thumbs up!!!!
oh btw, u should have added in loading part some score table/sheet (sth that shows how much coins u caught) so that u can use these earned scores in a real game part
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